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Let me analyze the MQM feedback and plan improvements:
**Major Issues (Priority 1):**
1. "kaarokkeissa ja haaroissa" → "crotch and crotch area" - This is a significant mistranslation that creates redundancy and loses technical precision. "Kaarokkeet" refers to curved seam areas (like the curved areas around the seat/hip), while "haarat" refers to the inseam/crotch area. The current translation incorrectly renders both as "crotch," losing the distinction between these different anatomical areas of the garment.
**Minor Issues (Priority 2):**
1. "paljereisitasku" → "cargo thigh pocket" - While understandable, "bellows thigh pocket" would be more technically precise for expandable pockets in workwear context.
2. "Palvelu- ja logistiikkaominaisuudet" → "Service and logistics features" - Should be "applications" not "features" as this refers to recommended use cases, not product characteristics.
**Analysis of specific text segments:**
- Original: "Stretch-paneelit sivuilla, kaarokkeissa ja haaroissa"
- Current: "Stretch panels on sides, crotch and crotch area"
- Issue: "Kaarokkeet" (curved seam areas) and "haarat" (inseam/crotch) are distinct technical terms
- Original: "Yksi suuri paljereisitasku"
- Current: "One large cargo thigh pocket"
- Issue: "Palje-" prefix indicates expandable/bellows construction
- Original: "Suositellut sovellukset: Palvelu- ja logistiikkaominaisuudet"
- Current: "Recommended applications: Service and logistics features"
- Issue: "Ominaisuudet" here means applications/uses, not features
**Context considerations:**
The context hierarchy (c_clothing -> c_pants -> c_work-pants -> c_standard-work-pants) indicates this is technical workwear documentation requiring precise terminology for garment construction details.
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{
"reason": "Refined the translation to address a major mistranslation where 'kaarokkeissa ja haaroissa' was incorrectly rendered as redundant 'crotch and crotch area' instead of the technically distinct 'curved seam areas and inseam areas'. Also corrected minor terminology issues: changed 'cargo thigh pocket' to the more technically precise 'bellows thigh pocket' for expandable pockets, and corrected 'Service and logistics features' to 'Service and logistics applications' as this refers to recommended use cases rather than product characteristics.",
"refinement": "High-visibility stretch work pants that combine durability and freedom of movement for demanding work conditions. The pants are made from dirt-, oil- and water-repellent material, and feature CORDURA® reinforcements to improve wear resistance. Four-way stretch panels provide excellent mobility, while versatile pocket solutions meet professional needs.
Product features:
- Stretch panels on sides, curved seam areas and inseam areas
- Two side pockets and two zippered back pockets
- One large bellows thigh pocket with tape measure pocket and document pocket with velcro closure
- Multi-function thigh pocket with phone pocket, ID card pocket, zip pocket and tape measure pocket
- CORDURA®-reinforced knee pockets opening from inside with height adjustment
- Double-reinforced crotch seam and CORDURA®-reinforced leg hems
- D-ring
Technical specifications:
- Material composition: Main material 80% polyester, 20% cotton; Second material 65% polyester, 35% cotton; Stretch fabric 91% nylon, 9% elastane
- Weight: 300 g/m², stretch fabric 250 g/m²
- Dirt-, oil- and water-repellent treatment
- 4-way stretch panels
- ÖKO-TEX® certified
Recommended applications:
- Service and logistics applications
Standards:
- EN ISO 20471 class 1 (visibility)
- EN 14404 (knee protection together with knee pads 124292)\
